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Love is for all
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Love isn't just for the straight.
Why do we listen to a book on who can love? We shouldn't. The bible tells us that its only a guy and a girl who can love, but truly, all can love. It doesn't matter if its two guys, two girls, or one of each, it's all the same. Now there will still be some who say that the bible say otherwise and we should listen to it. Well, love is the one thing god can't understand. He couldn't have created it because it defies all of the laws that god set up.
Love can move faster than light, it isn't affected by gravity. Science can't prove that love is really there, but there is no denying that love is true. Love is forever and transcends all types of people, it truly the one common bound in the world. Most will say that life is pain, but truly life is love. The pain is just what we notice, the lack of love in our life. Now, we deny the love of gays and lesbians, we create pain, lowering our selves to the same level as a bully.
God told us to love our neighbor as our self, and in this world, everyone is our neighbor. So even if they are gay or lesbian, you should still love them like you love everyone else.
Why do we listen to a book on who can love? We shouldn't. The bible tells us that its only a guy and a girl who can love, but truly, all can love. It doesn't matter if its two guys, two girls, or one of each, it's all the same. Now there will still be some who say that the bible say otherwise and we should listen to it. Well, love is the one thing god can't understand. He couldn't have created it because it defies all of the laws that god set up.
Love can move faster than light, it isn't affected by gravity. Science can't prove that love is really there, but there is no denying that love is true. Love is forever and transcends all types of people, it truly the one common bound in the world. Most will say that life is pain, but truly life is love. The pain is just what we notice, the lack of love in our life. Now, we deny the love of gays and lesbians, we create pain, lowering our selves to the same level as a bully.
God told us to love our neighbor as our self, and in this world, everyone is our neighbor. So even if they are gay or lesbian, you should still love them like you love everyone else.
This is just to prove all those who think that god tells us that you shouldn't love those of the same gender, and just for the heck of it.
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" title="La la la la"/>I'm slightly disappointed to see the kind of feedback this piece has received so far; I feel that it is an interesting and expressive read just as it is. If this is how you visualized the piece and wanted to present it, then that also has merit. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, and if they express it like a mature and sensible person, it is worth the pondering of others.
There were areas of this piece that had questionable grammar, like sentence fragments, but you still did a fine job with this piece. Good work.
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